martes, 18 de octubre de 2011

the fable part3


He wake up in the middle of the flabella, he try to escape. He went to the other side but were 4 people looking him, he went to the other but were 3 people. He took he s telephone and a person came and took the telephone. In one corner he saw the doctor and he call him, when the doctor came he told him I don´t know what happen can you help me trying to escape, I don’t like this please plis help me and a will give something to you

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  1. It seems as if you didn't use the draft to publish this. There are several mistakes. You mix tenses, you don't spell properly. Be careful next time.

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