In all this
time I didn’t pay attention to my son. I was a bad father I don’t care anything
about him, but now that he is the only salvation that this family have I have
to help him and be a good father.
I have to
help him publish his comic so that if the comic became famous and he became a writer
of comics I would help him to make the comics and I would have more money that
now.
In the last
time all the days he told me that he wanted to write a comic, that he loves
write comics but I don’t realize that he was a good writer and that if he
became famous he will have a lot of money and I can solve all the economics
problems that this family had, but if he didn’t became a famous writer I have
to continue working in the same place that I hate and they didn’t pay me a lot of
money, so I will help him write an excellent comic.
When the
comic a pairs in al the places my son will be famous person and if I help him y
can become famous to and win a lot of money working in tv programs.
Congratulations on your effort. This piece is quite well written. I think the tone of it is a bit too serious for someone like this boy´s father. Also, the fact that he says "I don´t care anything about him" sound too harsh. Remember he makes fun of his son, but he loves him.
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